Link — https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7t3MG0g5VUk
I decided to move sections of the narration to places in the video where appropriate. Doing that would make the concept of the video clearer to the audience and to reduce the time length so that the video would fit in with the project brief requirements.
I also included the repetitive ritual which would be the act of cleaning glasses. By showing the audience the man cleaning his glasses over again it would show the importance of his eyesight.